Joined: Fri Apr 27, 2012 5:09 am
Location: My House
I'm Seravi, or Sera, whichever you prefer. I do have a real name, however, and if you're nice maybe I'll tell you. I've been bouncing around rp sites since 2006 with a few goals in mind: better my wriitng, have fun rping because it's just oh so addicting, and meet new people.
Not sure about this place, but I'm assuming you want a sample of my writing? Very well then, I'll go through my graveyard of failed rp ideas and dig something out for you awesome people.
This is a fail... um I mean an older sample from a character I probably won't rp here, but I hope it works... Feel free to criticize it in any way, also.
Tucked carefully in his shoulder holster, his Desert Eagle .44 magnum pistol rested comfortably on his person; both gun and holster were hidden by the dark leather jacket he wore.
Being a military man, he knew to be careful even under the cover of darkness. Every step was taken with caution, and he remained vigilant. Vigilance was perhaps the only thing his insomnia was good for; he’s heard that, in some cases, people who suffered insomnia experienced heightened senses among other things.
It wasn’t long before he reached the cabin. A quick look around revealed there was a path leading to it all along, he felt somewhat stupid for not noticing it. However, this approach was much easier not to mention wiser. And it wasn’t like he could just waltz in the front door, unannounced, and start firing off rounds. No, he was professional about the way he carried out his missions. He had to be professional and have a calm, collected demeanor lest he be caught by the police or worse.
He felt no nervousness nor did he falter as he eased his way to the nearest window, still quiet as ever as silence was always the most crucial element when it came to hunting. Even if he exactly wasn’t a hunter, he supposed his work was similar in the sense he was stalking his prey and awaiting the moment to strike. The lights were all on, and it puzzled him why someone would want to live in the middle of the forest. And still have electricity at that. There were indeed some strange people in this world. He simply place d the thought aside and continued watching the man inside. He stood up –thankfully not moving to the window as he turned off his television. Perhaps he was getting ready to call it a night.
Now was the perfect time to end this man’s life.
Slowly, he lowered himself so he wouldn’t be seen should the man decide to look out the window. He put his back against the side of the cabin and removed his gun, proceeding to then click off the safety. Then, he peered cautiously through the window again to see if the man was still in view. It was a small cabin; the living room and kitchen were not separated by walls. This window gave him a clear view of everything except the bedroom and bathroom areas. Fortunately, the man remained in view as he moved about the cabin. He was still unaware of the danger that lurked outside his window, evident by the way he had his back turned, which only worked in his favor.
Grinning, he took aim, and fired. The man didn’t even know what hit him; his lifeless body hit the ground with a soft thud within seconds after the bullet left the barrel of his pistol. Mission complete and a job well done, he tucked the pistol back into his holster and examined his work for a moment. Not one of his better jobs, but it was still a clean shot nonetheless.
Ducking back into the shadows, he crept off into the night. Town was a few miles from here, and there he would find a payphone to call 'Maverick' and confirm his work had been done. He took the path leading from the cabin, careful not to look too suspicious should someone come up said path, and went on his way.
Then there's this..
What I look for in a roleplay:
Someone who will wrote more than a paragraph
Good character development and detail
Someone who will stick around until the end and not just stop in the middle (though rl stuff is understandable)
Strong plot development/plot twists
Godmoders/metagamers and such
People who vanish without warning
One liners and lack of detail
Roleplaying for the sake of sex or relationships only
Someone who doesn't contribute to the plot in any way, using my ideas as a crutch so to speak
Yep, even if it may have been a tad undeeded I think that about covers it. And yes, I put those in spoilers because I couldn't figure out how to do it otherwise and it still works anyway. I suck at forums. Nevertheless, I may just stick around for awhile if I decide I like this place enough ;) Do feel free to strike a conversation or plot some roleplays with me.
Oh and I'm more of a 1x1 person unless a group is just that intriguing.
Thank you, Truth!